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I don't wanna be a dick about it but at the moment it looks to me more like a gesture or underpainting than a finished piece.
It looks like you're putting more thought into the range of tone in your paintings though, which is awesome, but you need to make sure it's consistent. The jacket for example has way less contrast on it than the vest, and that looks a little weird. I don't know if you can use adjustment layers in Sai or what, but if you can, greyscale it periodically as you're painting to check your range of tone.
I'm also thinking you should put some colour in your shading just to give it more depth.
In short: Looking good but it needs FINISHING you FAG.
you douchebag